Strengths
- Strong mise-en-scene and costume - army uniform badge shown in over the shoulder shot which provides anchorage
- Strong framing - eg woman standing up and her head still being in shot
- Slow pace music fits well with slow pace editing
- Mise-en-scene of trees and greenery fits well with the style of melancholy non diagetic music
- Affective signifier of emotion when the woman strokes the photograph
- Well chosen shot variety
- Black and white tittles appropriate for genre of film
Areas that could be improved...and how...
- The first panning shot - stop panning and move to high angle shot when the camera reaches the woman
- Camera shakes when filming the envelope - potentially re-shoot
- Tone down the voice over, also there is background noise
- Maybe include extracts of voice over throughout the clip, with an elderly woman looking back
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